Thursday, March 18, 2010

History of the Vatican City

Objective




  1. The Popes have resided in the Vatican City since the return from Avignonin in 1377.


  2. The Swiss Guard has served the Popes since the 1500s.


  3. In 1667, Piazza di San Pietro (St Peter's Square) and the colonnade were designed and built by Bernini.


  4. Between 1861 and 1929, the status of the Pope was referred to as the Roman Question.


  5. Vatican City was established in 1929.


  6. In 1930, the Vatican's railway Station was opened and is used for freight.


  7. In 1969, the Vatican state eliminated capital punishment, which was in the legislation adopted in 1929 on the basis of Italian law.


  8. The Palatine Guard and the Noble Guard were disbanded by Pope Paul VI in 1970.


  9. A concordat altering the terms of church-state relations was signed in 1984.


  10. The Vatican City State has been registered in the World Heritage since 1984.


  11. On 3rd June, 1985 the Vatican and Italy authorise a new church-state known as a concordat.


  12. At the end of 2005, the Guard had 134 members.


  13. After the death of John Paul on 2nd April, 2005, German cardinal Joseph Ratzinger was entitled the new pope.


  14. As of 31 December, 2005, except from the Pope , 557 people has Vatican citizenship, while there were 246 residents in the state did not have its citizenship.


  15. In 2007, the Vatican become the first Carbon neutral state by reducing their carbon footprint with the creation of a forest in Hungary.


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Subjective



  1. The Popes have finally resided in the historical Vatican City since the last return from Avignon in 1377.


  2. The loyal Swiss Guard has served the Popes since the 1500s.


  3. In 1667, the famous Piazza di San Pietro (St Peter's Square) and the spetacular colonnade were perfectly designed and built by Bernini.


  4. Between 1861 and 1929, the social status of the Pope was strictly referred to as the Roman Question.


  5. Vatican City was well established on 1929 and becoming a independent state with it own government.


  6. In 1930, the Vatican's convenient railway Station was grandly opened 1930 and is mostly used for freight purposes.


  7. In 1969, the Vatican state eliminated the cruel capital punishment, which was in the legislation previously adopted in 1929 on the basis of Italian law.


  8. The Palatine Guard and the Noble Guard were totally disbanded by Pope Paul VI in 1970.


  9. A revised concordat altering the terms of church-state relations was eventually signed in 1984.


  10. The Vatican City State has been proudly registered in the World Heritage since 1984 because of it historical building and culture.


  11. On 3rd June 1985 the Vatican and Italy altogether authorised a new church-state known as a concordat.


  12. In 2007, the Vatican become the first Carbon neutral state by reducing their carbon footprint with the great and smart creation of a forest in Hungary.


  13. At the end of 2005, the faithful Swiss Guard had 134 members to perform their duty in Vatican City.


  14. After the tragedy death of John Paul on 2nd April 2005 , German cardinal Joseph Ratzinger was lastly entitled the new pope.


  15. As of 31 December 2005, except from the Pope, only about 557 people has persistant Vatican citizenship, while there were 246 residents in the state relavantly did not have its citizenship.

1 comment:

  1. Chai,

    Good work. I know that this was a difficult assignment and you didn't have as much time as your classmates to prepare for it. Here are some suggestions for you:

    Objective:

    . Avingnonin 1377 (AW)
    . Your second fact doesn't read clearly. Did the guards protect Pope Julius II or was he one of the guards? Rewrite this fact to make it more clear.
    . on 1929 (WC)
    . was opened 1930 (remove 1930... you already stated the year)
    . On 3rd June 1985 (this is not the correct form to write a date)
    . authorised (SP)
    . Make sure your events are in order- you have 2007 before 2005
    . 2nd April 2005 (not the correct form to write a date)
    . 31 December 2005 (not the correct form to write a date)
    . Your last fact is not a sentence; arrange your sentence more clearly so that there is a subject and a verb that follows. Make two different sentences if you need to.

    Subjective:

    . Make the same changes from above in this section as well.

    . have finally choose to resided (this doesn't make sense)
    . and becoming a independent state with its own government (there are many mistakes here with your verb tenses, articles, and possessives)
    . because of it (WF)
    . AFter the tragedy death (tragedy is a noun; you need to find the adjective form)

    Overall, you need to do a little bit more work. All of your nouns need adjectives and all of your verbs need adverbs. Also, all of your added adjectives should be one color and all of your added adverbs should be another color.

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